an emotional piece here. i felt a heavy vibe from the track by how it was produced. very old school feel. alot of the choices made in the track do a good job at propelling the listener towards the meaning i feel people will find within it. i enjoyed the little speech at the end aswell,i thought that was a nice touch,although it was sort of hard to hear on some words and phrases.perhaps a bit of eq would have made it more clear.mixing wise i felt a sense of unity with the drums as if they were played in the same room,however i felt that they could have been brought out a little more in the top end for some sheen.
overall good listen
I purposefully EQ'd the highs in the drums out to give them more crunch.
Get that Boom Bap sound going.
The speech is filtered a bit.
When I tried to make it stand out more I made it worse, so I just made it as loud as I could without drowning out the other elements.
The passing cars going down the street that the speaker was on didn't help either.
Thanks for the review Pyro. :)
been listening to your stuff for as long as i can remember,amazing work(preview or not).for feedback i would say bring out the lead a bit more in the climactic parts and maybe bring up the uper frequencies .great work though,mind if a ask what synth you used?
nice groove you've got here,i love the sampling here.very good work.maybe work a little bit on mixing the track but its got a solid beat. something that you can rap to,its sorta funky.
man i love your work,every time but i do agree the kick is missing that thwack! and the voice is hard to understand but besides that its a really awesome track man.right on.
I've been using the same kick over and over for the past few songs. The Thwack sound your describing is the Tok, the punch. I know it's lacking it I'm just having a hell of a time trying to create a good tok. Thanks for the feedback! =) always appreciate it
GrayZ is back! great quality like always.will be waiting for final version.
insane song man,love your music!
entertaining! to me this sounds nothing like dubstep,but thats not a bad thing.i think you should try and make whatever you feel comfortable making and explore beyond the boundaries of the music genres.the second half of the song came together well i felt but i would recommend making the drums a bit louder and try mastering your synths so they dont over power the other instruments. anyways good music making,peace.
Well thank you very much.
Yeah, its not dubstep, the beat (kick and snare) is, but the rest certainly isn't. And yeah, I don't know how to master, I knew the instruments conflicted some but those were the only ones I had with the sound I wanted considering I use the demo. Thanks for the review! Love your music man.
entertaining,fun, enjoyable. i appreciate you using one of my songs :P.anyhow theres a few things i want to point out.as an artist i see what you are trying to do with the vinyl crackle but it seems really distorted and somewhat too loud.i would personally try and make it a little crisper by using an EQ of some sort.the drums loop is quite nice and fitting but it too could use some mastering to really bring out the best of it. im not sure why the song would go silent every now and again,im sure its some sort of build up technique but it sort of throws me off.but with all that i like what you've done,and if you ever want to talk music or have questions let me know!peace.
not bad not bad,but im sure you can do much better! the intro was blan but if your new to this sorta thing thats understandable.try to have some build ups and have a composition set up for the song.also try and make your song more varied and longer(around 3 min) .dont get me wrong its a good start and i would certainly be willing to personally help you out but if your trying to get better just don't let anything stop you from making music.contact me if you would like to talk music.
yo, this track is great but not amazing.not in a bad way though.its really repetitive but to me that doesn't make a track good or bad(i mean have you heard whats on the radio?)anyways the drums are pretty boring but they sound amazing.maybe try changing the pattern to change the mood or add to the structure.all the sounds in my opinion sounded great but the track has no flare.its a chill track though dont get me wrong but nothing in it just pulls my attention. i think its a great start,its relaxing and maybe with some more time it could be really effective at getting peoples attention.
i like where your going with this so definitely keep it up,for real!
thanks im planning on making it again and adding variation to the drums
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